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welll the actuall plot was kind of creative, but your in college, and ive seen stuff made by 12 year olds that was better than this.

I like :]

Great use of the tutorial on deviant art . Great animation too.

hmmmmm...

I liked the dock. i can't figgure how you did that. but like i dont understand, im a mac and i dont get these sortssa problems.

Awsome help

this taught me a lot in flash. including hittests and walls

Usually your work is 999x Better.

This sucks. It hurts my ears. It's super identifiable that you used garageband loops. The loops don't go together. Do better stuff like you did with coffee shop.

Wow .

this is really good. can i use it in an animation , possibly ? i would give credit to you.